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Carefully seek the choicest kindling,
Not all is perfect, some is lacking.
But stacked beside the rest, 'tis prime
To build a blaze to last some time
Now 'tis lit though not yet ablaze
Fire needs air for flames to raise.
Whilst crackling wood would chime
Step away as warmth would climb
Though stray not too far nor too long
For left unchecked, she could smother
Or grow into the brightest of fires...
Such is the greatest neglectful wrong
As you'll miss the embers all together
And, too late, you'll be left sans pyre.
Not all is perfect, some is lacking.
But stacked beside the rest, 'tis prime
To build a blaze to last some time
Now 'tis lit though not yet ablaze
Fire needs air for flames to raise.
Whilst crackling wood would chime
Step away as warmth would climb
Though stray not too far nor too long
For left unchecked, she could smother
Or grow into the brightest of fires...
Such is the greatest neglectful wrong
As you'll miss the embers all together
And, too late, you'll be left sans pyre.
I had the urge and inspiration to write and this is the result. Just what came to mind, and as usual, it came in a kinda Petrarchan-esque style... but not exactly... and it's themed around fire, hence the title.
'So do you.'
||This is just a short story thinger I wrote while getting my pedicure yesterday. I think it turned out alright, though I haven't proof-read or edited at all, so I figured perhaps some others might enjoy. Idk if I will expand upon it, we'll see if the mood strikes me||
"Get down!" The cry came from Madeline as an arrow grazed her thigh. Wincing, she grasped the quarrel after it planted itself into the wood of a nearby tree, loosing it only to then nock it upon her own bow, loosing it once more into the neck of one of her attackers.
"There are too many!" Another arrow. "We have to get away from here," came the forceful cry of Roen who was al
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Talutations, lovelies! I wanted to give you all the 'heads up' that I will be going by a new name on here as soon as I go through the whole becoming a premium member thinger.
Why the name change? Well, if you missed my last journal entry, I am starting to sew and sell Slave Girl clothes like those in the Gorean Saga. I am basing much of my inventory on my IMVU account creations, and so, I am taking my namesake from there.
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Impressive that you took an Italian Renaissance form. Intriguing.